Karen’s Killer Book Bench: WHEN AN ANGEL WHISPERS, A Chance O’Brien Mystery Book 1 by Tess Thompson

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A Chance O’Brien Mystery Book 1


Macy Adams, a beautiful college student, is abducted and brutalized by a vicious serial killer known as the Bayou Butcher. She escapes with the help of a guardian angel and Houston Police Detective Chance O’Brien. After escaping her captor, she tries to start a new life, but is plunged back into his murderous grasp by circumstances beyond her control. When more women are murdered, only Macy can help the FBI catch the Butcher before he kills again. What they don’t know is that this time he is out for revenge and is pulling Macy into his carefully planned trap.

A Chance O’Brien Mystery Book 1


 “Give light, and the darkness will disappear of itself.”

Desiderius Erasmus

Ba Boom! Ba Boom! Ba Boom! The noise was deafening.  A drum or a clock. Yes, a tick but no tock.  Not a clock. Not a drum. Louder. Hammering. Beating. Ba Boom! Ba Boom! Ba Boom!

Macy moved her head from side to side and tried to open her eyes. Where was she? What was that sound? She was in a terrible dream. The kind that you have when you want to scream and scream, but you can’t.  You try to run and your feet won’t move. It’s as if they are glued to the floor. Why couldn’t she open her eyes? Why couldn’t she see?

Macy reached to cover her ears. Her chest ached from the vibrations. Her hands refused to move.  Her legs were paralyzed. She realized her eyes were already open and she gasped for air.

She could hear the pounding even louder coming from deep inside. Inside of her. Macy realized the pounding was her own heart beating inside her chest. “Oh God! Oh God! Oh God!”

Darkness! “Oh my God!” She exhaled slowly. Was she blind? Or was she just trapped? Would she stay in this darkness forever? Once, when she was a teenager during a truth or dare game, somebody asked her to name her worst fear. She hadn’t told the truth then. To do so would have made it real. Make it something that could really happen. But, it did happen.

This was her nightmare. The one she’d had since childhood. To be trapped, in darkness with no one. Alone. Left to go insane for all of eternity.

Macy sucked air into her lungs. It hurt to breathe. She could only manage small puffs. Tears poured down her face, and she sobbed in desperation.

Again, she pulled at her arms, but they were held down. She couldn’t move. Confused and bewildered, she cried harder. Her body shook with spasms. What had happened to her? Was she dead? She began to recite her childhood prayer.

“Macy,” a soft voice spoke to her from the darkness. A woman’s voice. “Macy, hush.” The voice caressed her. “You aren’t alone. I am here with you.”

The woman’s voice was low and raspy, and Macy strained to hear her. She spoke with an accent Macy didn’t recognize. Macy often heard Cuban or Mexican accents since she moved from Florida to Houston, Texas, but this was different. She felt someone hold her hand and rub her arm. The woman’s touch was like silk. It soothed her and Macy found that her tremors lessened.

“I’m dead aren’t I? Am I in hell? No, can’t be. I don’t believe in hell. Where am I? What happened to me? What have I done to deserve this?” Macy began to sob again and found it difficult to swallow. Her throat was raw from her screams.

“No, my little one, not dead.” the voice whispered. “You are very much alive, and I will help you stay that way. But, you must listen, Malyshka, and do what I tell you. He will be back soon.”

Macy pulled her arms again and discovered why she couldn’t move them. Her wrists were bound above her head, and it felt like her feet were bound as well. Because of the soothing voice and calming presence of the woman, her horror eased.

“Please, oh please, untie me,” she pleaded. “ I can’t move. I can’t breathe. I can’t see. Am I blind?”

“No, not blind, but blindfolded. You are in a dark and evil place. I would gladly free you if I had the power, but I do not. I cannot. I can only be with you and guide you.”

The voice seemed to be moving away, getting softer, and became more difficult to hear.”

“Oh, don’t go. Don’t leave me. Please don’t leave me,” Macy begged.

A whisper in her ear. A soft flutter on her skin. “I will not leave you. You are a strong girl. You will survive. I know this. I have seen it. Hush now. He is back and you must pretend to be asleep.”

“But, who are you?  Where am I?” Macy was building toward hysteria again.

“Shh. Evil is here. Close your eyes now. Be brave,” the voice whispered as it moved away.

Macy swallowed and listened for whoever he was. She heard what sounded like a door open and was about to scream for help when she heard a man say in a sing-song voice, “Macy, oh Macy. I’m here. I’ll bet you can’t wait to see me!”

Macy swallowed again, closed her eyes, and followed the woman’s warning. She pretended to be asleep.

About Author Tess Thompson…

Charlene Tess and Judi Thompson are sisters who live over 1400 miles apart. They combined their two last names into the pen name Tess Thompson and write novels as a team. This is the sixth novel they have written together.

Charlene Tess is a retired writing teacher and writes educational materials for TeachersPayTeachers.com. Her published works include ten novels, five nonfiction books, and numerous educational materials. Charlene lives with her husband Jerry in Colorado.

Judi Thompson has been writing since her early teens. She lives with her husband Roger in Texas. She is a retired supervisor for special education in a local school district. Judi is the author of six novels and is currently collaborating on another novel with her sister.


Links to Tess’s website, blog, books, etc.

When an Angel Whispers and other books by Charlene Tess and Judi Thompson (aka: Tess Thompson) are available on amazon.com at: http://tinyurl.com/TessThompsonBooks


Accidental Angel

Second Daughter

When an Angel Whispers

Student Body

The Devil Makes the Rules

The Chance O’Brien Mystery Trilogy

Stolen Laughter

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**SPECIAL GIVEAWAY**: Tess will give away an ebook copy of WHEN AN ANGEL WHISPERS to one lucky reader who comments on her Karen’s Killer Book Bench blog. A review is always appreciated!

Thanks, Tess, for sharing your book with us!

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6 Responses to Karen’s Killer Book Bench: WHEN AN ANGEL WHISPERS, A Chance O’Brien Mystery Book 1 by Tess Thompson

  1. Karen Docter says:

    Good morning, Tess, and welcome back to Karen’s Killer Book Bench. What a frightening excerpt! The psychological fears can be so much scarier than we can imagine. Thanks for sharing this book with us today!

  2. Sounds like a marvelous book!

  3. Kathleen Bylsma says:

    Making me read with all the lights on again!!!! Thanks!!!!
    Thanks, gang!

  4. Helen Rodin Drake says:

    This book sounds scary and riveting at the same time. I hope it does well!

  5. Eileen AW says:

    Welcome back. You do like to scare people who read your books. Oh, just me, okay. It still sounds like a good read. Just not late at night.

  6. bn100 says:


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